Assets
The drawings
Pawel
drew these.
I
think that the drawings are quite good, they show the types of people that we
are aiming the video towards. However I think that the drawing of the guy
shining someone's shoes, could have been closer up to the guy shining the shoes
because he’s meant to be the focus of the picture and its difficult to tell who
is meant to be the focal point. Also I think it could have shown his face as it
would have made it seem more personal.
Cameron
made the logo.
At
first we decided that we did not need a logo, as it was not really needed as
part of the project. However Cameron decided to make it. He first drew it out
on paper to mock it up. Then he made the final version on photoshop, however
the colours that he chose was not very nice and did not match the color scheme
that we had chosen.
Casebook
There
are lots of grammatical and spelling mistakes. For instance she spelt ‘Footage’
like ‘Photoaged’.
She
also added lots of things that were incorrect, such as she said that Sophie
Knight was given the task of drawing the city scape from the beginning, however
it was Pawels task first.
She
did not write anything about the posters however. 
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